EXAMS FINAL SELECTION


Oordeel van de jury: GOED + 75
Okidoki. En nu portretten maken ?

Assessment by the jury: GOOD + 75
Okidokee. And now make portrets ?

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Jury: Goed, Good

Comments jury:

technisch goed uitgevoerd. Goeie invulflits. Consequent gebruik van kleurenpalet.
let ook op de achtergrond en hoe die al dan niet meewerkt in je beeld. Metalen constructie werkt niet echt. Bloemetjeskader in de voorgrond werkt wel. Probeer de personages te sturen, misschien in onvoorziene richtingen, to see what happens ...

Technically well executed. Good use of fill flash. Consequent use of color scheme.

Try to focus on the background and how this works or not. The metal construction doesn't really work, the flowers in the foreground do work.
Try to guide the subject, maybe into unexpected directions, to see what happens ...

Taken: May 29, 2010
Uploaded: May 31, 2010
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Captured with:
Canon EOS 7D

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  • 4 years 1 month ago
    a little bit more skin colour / tone would help also.- the problem is that the viewers eyes are torn between two subjects (1) the flowers and (2) the hands. You have to decide as the photographer which subject you are presenting