it makes me curious how it would look in b&w - I find it a little busy but love the model, look, and pose - might crop at the knee to focus the eyes more on the upper torso - what story are you telling here and why? every picture tells a story and this one is telling too many - floor boards, drss, pillow, fabrics, arms, looks, eyes, hair - sloping angles - which story will win out?

Great colours. How is life?