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  • (Anonymously) (Private)
    5 years 7 months ago
     3313
    this is pretty, great cloudage, and colors!!
  • (Anonymously) (Private)
    5 years 9 months ago
    Part of the San Andreas Fault line
    ooh wicked cool, love the holes on it, cool!!
  • 5 years 10 months ago
    Getting close in the desert.
    I love the picture and composition here. I think it might do it a little more justice to darken the foreground a little more, so people don't get pulled away from the main focus.

    Great colors. Great shapes.

    Lovely!
  • 5 years 11 months ago
    Not much life ... but there's still beauty.
    I like the impulse - the bands, rocks, hills, clouds. To me, the story is about those and not the clouds so I would crop down a bit - you probably want the little bit of light on the cloud and are reluctant to do so, but, you are trying to make this a picture of the landscape and the clouds, but usually it is better to choose the stronger 'story' and to me that is the land and not the clouds - but as the artist YOU must choose and not try to be all things for all people - clouds or land - which is it? To my overly opinonated eye the land takes away from the clouds and the bit of light at top of the clouds takes away from the landscape - you need to have the courage to tell your best visual story and pick that story.
  • 5 years 11 months ago
    Giant finger rocks!
    I love the blue of the sky and the sharply deliniated rock fingers but I think you were not sure what your subject was - the rocks or the sky. I would have waked up a little further and shot up a bit more and shown less sky - e.g. I would have chosen the rock fingers against a little sky - making the middle 4 fingers or so the 'story'


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